Escape From Kraznir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Since the start of last term in my EL4 maths group we have been working on a story writing adventure called "Escape From Kraznir". Its about a small town called Slinsil that has rumours going around it that Kraznir a warlike place is going to attack Slinsil. So Slinsil sent a team of three brave , strong, smart and powerful people. Heres what I've written so far:

Chapter One:

The Dungeon

Bones crunched, sculls cracked, and chains rattled as Touchfire, Doughty and I made our way through the darkness of the dungeon tunnels walking light footed, but suddenly  ”AHHHHHHHH!” Touchfire screamed as bloodthirsty scorpions crawled up his legs,”What is it?’’ Doughty asked,”There’s something crawling up my legs, and there’s lots of them!” Touchfire screamed.  “How big are they?” I asked. Touchfire paused………”MASSIVE!” He screamed. ”Good!”. “Now, lets go and get this food”, I said.

(a short time later.)

”Crunch Munch! Munch! Munch!, MMmm-mmm that scorpion was delicious.” Doughty said.

“Right we are finally out of the dungeon” I said

“Shhhhhh”-, Touchfire whispered -“There’s a guard right there”, “Wait, don’t you have an invisible spell, Touchfire” Doughty said.

“Yes I do”, “UOMIOAW NUTHSTIONDERUO NAANI”, Touchfire whispered. Suddenly Touchfire was gone, “WHOA”, I said.

“Where are you”, I said.

Over here”, he whispered.

“Quickly go and take that guard out, before your spell runs out”, I explained.  RUN daaaanananananananananananananana!!

Suddenly the guard was gone and we were safe.

“Come on we’ve got to get this food!” I said.

“Remember, be quiet” Touchfire said,

“We can’t risk getting caught”he said nervously.

In a few minutes we were right outside the foodstore.

“Doughty, run up behind the guard and cover his mouth then take him out, but remember, be quick and quiet” I explained.

A moment later the guard was down and would be knocked out for a long time.

“The food’s just over here” Touchfire said,

“Coming” Me and Doughty said at the exact same time. We crawled over to the food and making sure we didn’t attract any unwanted attention.

As we made our way over Touchfire tripped over but luckily put a levitation spell on just in time. Once we got over to the food store we stocked up on as much food and drinks as we could.

It all fit into Touchfires never ending bag. But suddenly Doughty spotted a guard coming, “Quick over here” he whispered as Touchfire chucked his invisibility cloak over all of us and Doughty lead us out of the food store out into the middle of the hallway. Doughty lead us right outside where the guards slept, but he didn’t care, he just ran straight through and luckily didn’t get caught. Now we were right by all the lethal war weapons. We stocked up on as much as we could just like the food. Then we started on our great journey through the dark tunnel………..

Chapter 2

Escape

We’re about halfway through the tunnel and then we heard some strange noises coming from a little passage way. The noises started to get louder and louder. Then doughty saw something then shouted, “RUN” we ran and ran until we came to the end of the tunnel. We looked back and to our surprise they were gone. “Quick” I said-”we have to get out of here before we get caught by more guards”. We started heading down the sketchy, windy and cold path. Suddenly we started hearing some weird noises, “IT”S WARGS”, Touchfire shouted being the nerdy one. We all started running. The noises started get louder like they were right behind us. I looked back and sure enough, they were. Then I spotted some trees we could hide behind, “Quick, over here!!”, we all ran and hid behind a tree each. The wags ran straight past us which was a huge relief. We all waited for a little bit until we couldn’t hear a single peep from them. Then we all came out then continued our journey down. Once we got to the bottom we realised that there was a river to cross. We spotted a small boat in the distance and started running over.