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Improving My Comment
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Today in room 1 Koka Maria came in and helped improve our blog comment that we did with our blogging buddies. We had to insert our original comment into the top bit then add our improved one in the bottom bit. Here it is:
Hey Nikau, Lockie here. I like how you have been talking about improving your comments. I like how you have put one of my schoolmates in this post. To be honest, this is really good.
Kia ora Nikau I really like the way you have carefully thought about how to improve your original blog comment and that your buddy has also made a change suggestion. Tino pai buddy checking!! Do you think this task, Improving Blog Comments, is useful? Why? Koka Jo
Hey Nikau, Lockie here. I like how you have been talking about improving your comments. I like how you have put one of my schoolmates in this post. To be honest, this is really good.
ReplyDeleteByeee!!!
Kia ora Nikau
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have carefully thought about how to improve your original blog comment and that your buddy has also made a change suggestion. Tino pai buddy checking!! Do you think this task, Improving Blog Comments, is useful? Why?
Koka Jo